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Revisions got you banging your head against the wall?

I help fantasy and sci-fi authors like you with kind and honest editing that gets you excited to jump back into the next draft of your novel.

Ways I can help you with your book:

Editorial Evaluation

Get category-specific assessments on every aspect of your draft, that way you know what’s already publication-ready and what needs a bit more work.

And I won’t just tell you what’s wrong with your book and leave you hanging, either. With each evaluation, you’ll get a personalized recommendation of what’s next for your novel, plus five additional questions of your choice, so I can make sure we’re tackling everything that’s holding you back.

Custom Story Bible

Get all your story details organized so that you don't have to spend hours rereading the previous book just to confirm a detail for the next one.

Custom story bibles are searchable and color coded to make it that much easier to track down any detail you might need to pull up again. Main character's stepbrother's eye color? Got it! The name of the planet the villain briefly visited in Book 2, Chapter 18? No problem!

Not sure how to start revising?
I've got a free guide for you!

Whether you're just gearing up to start the second draft or muddling through the tiniest details in the almost-final draft, this guide can help you make sure you're on the right track. It takes you through the entire revision process step by step, from first reread to final detail polish. Use it as a guide as you begin your revision journey or as a checklist to make sure you didn't miss any steps. You've got this!

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About the Editor

Hey, I’m Toni, editor of all books fantasy and sci-fi, whether you’re writing for middle grade, young adult, new adult, or adult audiences.

When I discovered that only 20% of those who finish writing the first draft of a novel eventually go on to publish, I knew I could help. I’ve been stuck in revisionland many times before—it’s not a fun place to be! But kind, insightful, and personalized feedback was always the key to getting me through my second drafts and beyond, and that’s what I strive to provide to the authors I work with.

If you want to know more about my editing philosophy, my credentials and experience, or about me in general, head over to the Meet the Editor page. All my social media is linked there as well.

Editor Toni Suzuki holds her sheltie while standing in front of hydrangeas.


I was looking for an editor that understood the conventions of LitRPG and shared my love for animal companions and I found just that! Toni was very thorough and gave me feedback on how to improve every aspect of the story.

Alix Roche

LitRPG author

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